looks like a interesting start,
maybe you could share your thoughts on what it represents and where you would like to take it,
so you can get some feedback and idea's on the 'storyline' before you do the editing work.
maybe what you showd could just be the basis for a more in depth storyline,
now it is
For centuries...
... the shape of money had not been changed...
... until Bitcoin arrived in 2009...
... 2014...
... will be the year of its successor...
NXT
anyone got idea's to edit, expand or rewrite this story?